Recently, i discern some of my friends like to skip class. I can heard a lot of complain from them something about the school .Before that i can not understand what reasons to make them not interest to attend class. After heard their reasons, i can feel te feeling and notice all the the problem also i faced sometimes.
First, the reason cause students detest to entry the class is classes with bad lecturer. Lecturer is the most important people during class.If the lecturer has bad teaching skill, this might cause students cannot solve their own study problem or question.As example, some lecturer will teach or speak will fast speed. This will effect students cannot catch up the speed of lecturer and cannpt full understand at all, this will make them become more confuses.Some lecturer also have their own bad atitude such as lazy,always late entry class, or like to change the class time.Beside that, some of lecturer have bad tempered, they will easy to angry.This will effect student feel annoyed or afaird to them.
In addition, class with bad surrounding also will effect students detest to class.As me , i hate the classmate whose are noisy during the class.I notice that some of my classmate like to talk a lot during the class. During the class, they like to talk something about his hostel friends or something that no related to study or course.This will cause me cannot pay full attention during the class. In the other hand, students also can nnot accept the facilities of class is bad.Sometimes, stay in our class is hot like stay at an oven and the light also have some problem that have not be solve. Sometime the light is dim. Dirty classroom also a big problem that cause all student inclede me detest the class.Sometime, we can see that some chewing gums stuck on or under table or chair. If we notice, we can keep away from such thing. Also, some of students also will throw the plastic after eating at surrounding and cause the enviroment become more dirty and uncomtable.
Last but not least, class with bad timing also will make me detest to entry the class.Sometimes the time of class set at morning.We need wake up early in morning to make some prepare for class or to take bath and eating breakfirst.Study at the morning, students will feel no energy and no enough sleep.This will cause us rushed.Beside that, the class at afternoon from 12.00pm to 2.00pm also the time will cause me detest the class.From 12.00pm, i need take my lunch before the class.But after have a lunch i will fell tired.This will cause me feel tired durin the class and make me sleep in class.But if i not take lunch before class, i will feel hungry during the class. This will effect me cannot pay attention to the class.
Conclusion, those class with bed lecturer , bad surrounding and bad timing of class will cause me detest the class. So, all of the school need solve all the problem to overcome all the problem that have faced by student to ensure students did not detest the class. This also will reduce that rate of students skip class.
Dearest Nailo,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing with us on the types of classes that you dislike and after looking at the examples you gave, I also dislike those classes :(
The points are systematically arranged and each paragraph is well developed but the thesis statement that should be at the end of the intro should be there and it should be: I dislike certain types of classes, which are classes with bad lecturers, surrounding and timing.
There are some words that are wrongly used for ex: the lecturer always late entry class. It should be lecturers always enter the class late or lecturers are always late for classes...
Whose is used to show owner of something but you said that you dislike classmates whose are noisy, this is not showing owner, so to just give more info, just use who, i hate classmates who make noise.
ex of whose: Ms Lim, whose son got into a fight last night, is missing!
Don't worry ya, we all learn from our mistakes :)
Shall read another 2 essays asap ya ^^
Thanks for being patient :)
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Ms Jasline